This book is a work in progress and has no name. You are welcome to read it. The plot is carefully laid out already which means i will constantly be going back and forward tweaking what the characters do, how they react, what they say and sometimes erasing them wholesale and starting from scratch. If you want to send me an opinion on the book so far that would be most welcome.

All I am looking for is personal opinions on whether you enjoy reading it or not, nothing else*. No unqualified plot suggestions, no character suggestions and absolutely no writing style suggestions. If you hate it or love it say why and move on. Got it? Good.

It should go without saying that all of this is copyright me^tm so if you want to reprint or republish more than about a paragraph I must ask you to get permission from me^tm.

For less than that you can go ahead as long as you give credit and link back either to here http://midnightjester.co.za or my weblog at wordpress, http://midnightjester.wordpress.com. Thanks.

chapter one .... James

chapter two .... Monica

chapter three .... Jonathan

chapter four .... James

chapter five .... not up

*With the exception of anyone whose site I am linked to on any of my pages. You are all at least guaranteed interesting.